This is a cause and effect paper on obesity. I already wrote my thesis statement and did the outline of information that has to be included in the paper.
I. Introductory paragraph
a. Thesis statement: obesity is a growing problem in today’s society, it has a direct effect on a person’s health, mentality, social life and ecosystem.
II. Supporting paragraphs
a. Cause A (body paragraph #1) topic sentence: obesity has longterm and immediate effects on an individuals health.
i. Subpoint 1 -body pain and difficulty with physical function
ii. Subpoint 2- type 2 diabetes or coronary heart disease can develop from being obese.
iii. Subpoint 3-respiratory disorders
iv. Subpoint 4- obese individuals are at a higher risk for cancer.
v. Subpoint 5-obesity causes bone /joint damage and accidents.
b. Cause B (body paragraph #2) topic sentence: a person’s mental state tends too deteriorate due to obesity.
i. Subpoint 1-mental illness such as anxiety another mental disorders.
ii. Subpoint 2- low self-esteem due to being obese
iii. Subpoint 3 -obesity for some people is a result of PTSD
iv. Subpoint 4-obesity is linked directly too Binge eating disorder.
v. Subpoint 5-
c. Cause C (body paragraph #3) topic sentence: obesity is associated with a poor personal and social life.
i. Subpoint 1- people who are obese tend to not like being around large crowds
ii. Subpoint 2-people suffering from obesity are more likely to be bullied or humiliated because of their weight.
iii. Subpoint 3-obesity can cause marriage problems .
iv. Subpoint 4- people with obesity tend to not have strong social bonds with others
v. Subpoint 5-obese people tend to have a harder time finding a companion.
d. Cause D (body paragraph #4) topic sentence: how does obesity effect the environment and economic system.
i. Subpoint 1-obesity contributes to greater GHG emissions.
ii. Subpoint 2- The more food being consumed leads to a greater demand for food.
iii. Subpoint 3- More resources are being used to supply processed foods for the obese.
iv. Subpoint 4- more fast food restaurants are being built to supply the demand for fast and convenient eating.
v. Subpoint 5- obesity has a direct impact on direct medical spending.
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