Anthropology

this the previous instruction which lead to fail the paper:

The Zulu, or also known as Amazulu, are a Bantu ethnic group of Southern Africa. • an introduction to the culture group • a general description of the aspect of the culture from the anthropological perspective, what is it and what role does it serve in human society • a description of the aspect of culture as it appears in the culture group • an explanation of the role or impact the cultural aspect has in the society • an analysis of how this aspect of culture compares between its general function as described by anthropologists and its specific function within the society The paper is intended to be on a larger social/societal group; the way humans organize life. Defined by anthropologists as large social groups, with persistent interactions, who share the same territory, governed by the same political authority and dominant cultural expectations. a minimum of 5 sources required, primary or academic sources preferred. no quotes from any source are allowed in the paper, instead the author of the paper (you) will use their own words in conveying the meaning of referenced source material. In the conclusion do a summary and evaluation

now: im placing a edit and proof reading to improve the paper
the reason that the paper is failed and i got 1 out of 60 is below:
Yes, I am giving you the opportunity to fix your paper, have it reflect the assignment. The focus of the paper is gender, you have no discussion of gender in a general sense, what role it plays in culture. Then a look at gender among the Zulu. How does this compare with gender in general?
i will provide the previous final version of the paper.