education and girls’ empowerment

The paper needs to be revisioned.
To be revisioned there is need to keep in mind the following points:
– Does the paper respect the AIM and the FOCUS? And the indication that the leading professor is an anthropologist (so anthropological aspects are important)
– According to the previous question, there is a need to revision the research questions and the methodological section
– With regard to the methodological section (Research strategy, design, and methods) there is needs to be fixed in accordance with the aim and the focus. Moreover, there is a sense of confusion in the explanation of methods and how this will be used. There is a lack of realistic evidence and facts in choosing the methodology. There is no contextualization. When a method is chosen there is a need to explain why and in which way that method will help in the research. As well as the other choices. There is a need to better explain how data will be collected, from which sources, in which modalities. How the questionnaires etc. will be built and used. To sum up, there is a need for realism. Taking into consideration the participants, the actors involved, the particular setting, and context.
– There is no clear explanation about the pre-field work (and evidently there was not a real understanding of what it is) and post-field work (how to manage the data, etc).
– Overall, a lack of references throughout the paper especially in the background part (where references are important to make understand that you are an expert on the topic and of the setting that you chose) and in the methodological section.

the files I attached include:
– instructions (TO BE READ CAREFULLY)
– The paper to be revisioned
-an example of a very good research proposal from previous years.