Master program admission Personal statement essay editing/proofreading

1. Columbia University School of Professional Studies- Enterprise Risk Management
The statement of academic purpose should address the following:
your purpose and interest in pursuing the M.S. in Enterprise Risk Management program, focusing on how it relates to your immediate and long-term professional plans, and what your current role is
the areas you hope to explore in our curriculum
what you will contribute to the program and student cohort
how you expect to contribute to the field
a brief discussion of a particular risk field or issue of interest to you
2. Boston University- Enterprise Risk Management
Upload a statement of not fewer than 200 words describing your qualifications and the objectives of your educational program. Please describe your motivation for pursuing graduate study in view of your formal education, current job responsibilities (if applicable), and career aspirations. You may want to discuss any gaps or weaknesses in your background that you expect to address in your graduate study. Please include the reasons you believe the program to which you are applying fits your personal goals and career plans.