Proposal: Leader of historical significance( pay special attention to the factors contributing to the subject’s leadership success).

ASSIGNMENT

Please use the following outline to shape your research proposal. This proposal is limited to 400 words. The purpose of this document is to allow the reviewer to see how your topic fits into a broader context. In short, tell the reviewer what you plan to do!

Proposed title of the paper
Your name
Professor
Date

I. General introduction and overview of the topic
Place the project within a broader context and provide the reader with some idea of why it is important. The introduction moves the idea from “this is an interesting topic” to “this is worthy of investigation.” There should be citations within your introduction to support the discussion.
II. Procedures and Methodology
Research methodology defines the logical steps – What to do and how to solve the problem and achieve proposed objectives?
• Introduction
• Literature Review
• Analysis
• Summary
III. Reference list: APA Formatting

BELOW IS WHAT HE SAID ON A REAPONSE PAPER:

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Your usage of transitional phrases is below average. Please review the writing tips below.
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The following transitional phrases were found in your document:
and, however

Consider using additional transitions where appropriate:
• consequently
• moreover
• nevertheless
• notwithstanding
• accordingly
• conversely
• ordinarily

Transitional phrases may be used in various places in a text:
• between paragraphs
• between sentences
• between sentence parts
• within sentence parts

Consider this example:
I lost my money; therefore, I could not buy a ticket.

The word ‘therefore’ contributes to greater unity or cohesion between sentences and allows the text to flow more smoothly.
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Index Score
Automated Readability Index 15.6
Coleman-Liau Index 17.2
Dale-Chall Readability Formula 8.1