Revised (FINAL DRAFT) and response to feedback

First Read the file carefully, and make sure you follow these instructions exactly, and make whatever adjustment needed accordingly:

Please submit 1) your revised research proposal and 2) your response to your peer review here. Please have these together in one document (.pdf).

Proposal Final Version (20 marks) and Explanation of Revisions (2 marks)
Submit a revised paper (of the same format as the first draft, ~ 1500 words) and, in the same document,
include an additional 300-1000-word explanation of the changes you made in
response to your peer-reviewed feedback. This explanation should be formatted as a list
of numbered items. Each item should include the suggestion made, the changes you
made (or did not make) in response, and a justification for your actions (please do not
just say ‘because it was requested’).